Constructive Critiscism

 I commented on Courtney St. Louis's blog and on Jasmine Fineese’s. I picked their blog specifically because they've decorated their page very nicely, and have a good writing format. In Courtneys blog I commented on her 5^th shot and 4^th shot. In her 5th shot i could really capture the peaceful mood of the environment. Her wide shot demonstrates the amazing scenery of the garden perfectly. In her 4th shot she showed a close overhead which really helped bring light to the body movements being made and to the intensity of the scene as a whole. 

On Jasmines blog I commented on her 1^st and 2^nd shot.  In her first shot she did an excellent job at conveying happiness. Subject is shown smiling against a white wall,  overall portraying him as very happy especially because of the contrast given by the wall. Jasmines 2^nd shot made subject seem very annoyed and unhinged. Using a full body shot was the perfect idea as his body language really helped illustrate his negative emotions.